tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post6548755892020498035..comments2023-10-29T20:13:48.939+05:30Comments on Shalaka, A Ray of Hope: Opposite Poles..Part 138Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07074551404792130268noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-65095575157717383542013-04-20T00:50:41.620+05:302013-04-20T00:50:41.620+05:30Dear:
Hope you can take positive criticism.
First...Dear:<br />Hope you can take positive criticism.<br /><br />First plus points:<br /><br />Language is very good.<br />Updates are regular.<br />Storyline though based on original IPKKND but interesting twists and turns are there.<br />I like the language fluency as well.<br />Title is excellent.<br /><br />Now the negative points:<br /><br />I sometimes feel that story has jumped from one incident to another one without any connection with the previous one such as recently in an update you wrote about 'Khushi's head massage to ASR" don't you think that reader will enjoy the scene and its background. Like this every chapter seems to be a separate story, lots of connections and scenarios are missing. If you just read your own story in one go you would like to make lots of changes/connections in many places yourself.<br /><br />Please take it positive, I am a regular reader of your story. Nice try,just if few amendments are made it will be worth publishing.<br /><br />Your well wisherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-91180933599684985872013-04-20T00:27:01.379+05:302013-04-20T00:27:01.379+05:30painful but beautiful writing
Agafteapainful but beautiful writing<br />AgafteaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-80729113488796954212013-04-19T20:43:28.631+05:302013-04-19T20:43:28.631+05:30I agree with u completely KF,this happens in a lot...I agree with u completely KF,this happens in a lot of families,even in the so called educated elite class,the pandits r often (not always)unscrupulous n can be bribed to give biased opinions,thereby wrecking many lives in this processsmishamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-53953509160370851552013-04-19T19:40:12.171+05:302013-04-19T19:40:12.171+05:30the person who always think about others happiness...the person who always think about others happiness and about others betterment can never be a bad omen they are something which is most precious.sharannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-22038782470151428302013-04-19T19:39:57.111+05:302013-04-19T19:39:57.111+05:30the person who always think about others happiness...the person who always think about others happiness and about others betterment can never be a bad omen they are something which is most precious.sharannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-46951878102537685262013-04-19T18:40:26.004+05:302013-04-19T18:40:26.004+05:30Can u please give the links to your other storiesCan u please give the links to your other storiesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-25080547836017378162013-04-19T17:27:58.903+05:302013-04-19T17:27:58.903+05:30payal & amma... haha papaji mummyji coming to ...payal & amma... haha papaji mummyji coming to Delhi... he's going to take khushi with them... oh dear... dis buwaji... arggghhhh.. oh my poor khushi... <br /><br />yes the panditji has told the truth.. arnav has no family... i mean his parents has dead... oh so much pain dear... even then i luved it.. update soon dear.. luv u..kalaiselvisbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02932764891648585813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-76573195746394777732013-04-19T16:37:00.173+05:302013-04-19T16:37:00.173+05:30Buwaji cornered by showing family's weakness t...Buwaji cornered by showing family's weakness to Khushi. Hope, Khushi wouldn't bow head for her destiny. Feel for Khushi. Nice updateApplecutnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-69470540497494030282013-04-19T15:46:59.454+05:302013-04-19T15:46:59.454+05:30hey kushi fan.im dying to read more of ur stories ...hey kushi fan.im dying to read more of ur stories pls can u tellme of anyother stories..plantasy to verify i finished reading thrice....so anyoher one..oy of arshis do u have dear....kaelinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-23818299765403691832013-04-19T15:12:29.360+05:302013-04-19T15:12:29.360+05:30hey its really really awesome..i was waiting for u...hey its really really awesome..i was waiting for ur update from yesterday dude...i loved it...and actualy i oved the flavour of buajis charachter..u made her look bad at the beginning and then now concluded well telling her ,her own insecurities on kushi..and atlast again brought the bad touch..ur not making her look evil but just a old woman thoughts imposing on youngsters...i actually loved that way u portrayed..awesome...and i think its hight time u should bring either arshis confession or shyam revealing....and i loved u for another reason...yeahh u brought my papaji back..balwandar singh...haha loved it..pls update more and more and more...atleast i want two dose a day...two updates pls...sorry if i am being selfish...love u..kaelinkaelinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-81626405896767119002013-04-19T13:23:20.639+05:302013-04-19T13:23:20.639+05:30Know that Khushi would spring back soon...but stil...Know that Khushi would spring back soon...but still heart bleeds for her...so she's all set to runaway after marrying an orphan....let's see which orphan!.......and Balwinder Singh and fmly too undergoing some turmoil.....<br /><br />Buaji is blessed with ignorance......good for her, but bad for people around her!<br /><br />Looking forward to read more soon.....thanks KhushifanMymindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06776174719564895160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-17222243111494034812013-04-19T13:20:01.780+05:302013-04-19T13:20:01.780+05:30i am going to go to qutation gang to kill this bua...i am going to go to qutation gang to kill this buaji and her slime babua.really really,she is the BAD OMEN,ITS BECOZ OF HER, HER HUSBAND DIED.AND SHE DOES NOT HAVE CHILDREN..........................................................................................SLIMY AND BUAJI SHUD GET MARRIED(THEY MAKE A WONDERFUL PAIR LYK OUR ARSHI BUT NT UPTO THEM).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-59161457075840271252013-04-19T12:46:11.269+05:302013-04-19T12:46:11.269+05:30My heart goies out to Khushi. I could feel her pai...My heart goies out to Khushi. I could feel her pain. Her innocence and intelligent were both shown very nicely. But she is feeling so trapped she doesnt know what do. I am sure she will also find some one soon who will show her the way. Her overwhelming faith in Devi Maiyya will not be waste. Her DM will send someone to her. I will be waiting for the day.. New Year will bring new life for her. I am Sure :)Aparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16275550894033680230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-49437040894850443242013-04-19T12:41:25.314+05:302013-04-19T12:41:25.314+05:30Hi di,
Such a sad and emotional update.I felt like...Hi di,<br />Such a sad and emotional update.I felt like crying.How can anyone be sooo cruel.Anyways it was a very nice update.Thanks for taking out time from your busy schedule to update your story.Payal's stance toards buwaji was amazing.Only and only you have the capacity to turn a meek lamb to a fierce lioness.Loved it so much.<br /> Di I wanna read that story which you wrote on khushi's life on 31rst december night.Where will I get it?I searched for it without any success.Can you give me the link plzzzzz?<br />LoveAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04256929077138397332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-76905257601927470552013-04-19T10:13:53.909+05:302013-04-19T10:13:53.909+05:30i feel like crying..when i read it first thing in ...i feel like crying..when i read it first thing in the morning..i just hugged my husband tightly and rested for peace..thanking DM for my destiny and whatever i have got..the best of parents, the best of in-laws, the best of friends, the best of brothers, sisters and cousins and most important the bestest husband..I LOVE YOU GOD...Dayavantihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13202381129365239586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-16743343675434467862013-04-19T08:24:16.417+05:302013-04-19T08:24:16.417+05:30please di don't let her engaged to that sham.....please di don't let her engaged to that sham.. please please please.. do something please...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-36218238158480868932013-04-19T08:15:05.857+05:302013-04-19T08:15:05.857+05:30Anyways di, today is a holiday. Right??? So?? u kn...Anyways di, today is a holiday. Right??? So?? u know what i mean... please... waiting for ur next updateAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-57409812941227166392013-04-19T08:12:35.996+05:302013-04-19T08:12:35.996+05:30Wen Shyam care for buaji so much then why can'...Wen Shyam care for buaji so much then why can't he marry that nand kishore?? they make a good pair, always troubling our Khushi... Yes i felt a bit bad that ARSHI is not there in this update but Khushi's questions were actually right... Now my doubt cleared that this bad omen thing has also come because of that creepy sham... priyankaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-55697962914357316232013-04-19T08:03:01.880+05:302013-04-19T08:03:01.880+05:30KF, this episode was beautifully written, Khushi&#...KF, this episode was beautifully written, Khushi's pain and anguish were apparent. Buaji is a horrible horrible person to be blindly believing Shaam babua over her own family. I hope she is dealt with justly when Shaam's truth comes to the fore. I have always felt that Khushi should have stopped talking to her.rainqrazyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16189367076691161077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-21170814655430351452013-04-19T07:04:39.393+05:302013-04-19T07:04:39.393+05:30The only good this is Balwinder and Uncle DasGupta...The only good this is Balwinder and Uncle DasGupta, sob sonarhiforeverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07738437810037223089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-24043759364078179362013-04-19T07:03:56.568+05:302013-04-19T07:03:56.568+05:30do not like Buaji, how is it Khushi's fault, n...do not like Buaji, how is it Khushi's fault, no way, why is no one able to see different line of sight, and only what is shown by Shyam. I hate the feeling that everyone is handcuffed and not able to breathe. Its like chudiya phenehi sabne, cannot Garima speak up. Too much tears, cannot take it anymore, last week was getting suffocated by ASR and this week this. Will Payal speak up for Khushi or just like in the show will only take care of herself?<br /><br />Where is ASR now?arhiforeverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07738437810037223089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-91634179795050337782013-04-19T06:43:31.841+05:302013-04-19T06:43:31.841+05:30Khushifan, NO!!!! Buaji is so cruel! Sob, sob! S...Khushifan, NO!!!! Buaji is so cruel! Sob, sob! Saying that to titliya who will believe everything! Damage needs to be controlled and now.<br /><br />Das and Balwinder are in this story too! I hope they bring some relief to Khushi and take her away with them.<br /><br />Since ASR is the one who caused all the trouble, doubt if Payal will run to him with this new musibat caused by Shyam and his pandit.jessjazzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00732212837356547895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-13622982771394568132013-04-19T06:18:35.401+05:302013-04-19T06:18:35.401+05:30"He held buwaji’s hand and took her inside&qu..."He held buwaji’s hand and took her inside" BuaJi and Slime would make a much better couple, can't you develop this plot instead: )<br /><br />The one good part of this episode was the return of Balwinder and Uncle DasGupta. Hopeully there will be some light at the end of this episode but I guess we still have to sit thru the engagement between Slime and Khushi (bummer) kkg fan Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-21483561731485508702013-04-19T03:14:11.717+05:302013-04-19T03:14:11.717+05:30I have heard a lot about these type of beliefs and...I have heard a lot about these type of beliefs and pactices happenin in India and consider myself really fortunate that I never had to be subjected to it. My heart goes to all those who are the 'victims' of such circumstances. Not everyone ends up with a person like Sham but still a person should be allowed to express their feelings where marriage is concerned. Very sad for Khushi...Payal will do something...DM please do smile on our Khushi. This update was necessary...Thanks KF.God bless you.Suhananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8143121426994635550.post-85396652155937371542013-04-19T02:52:19.519+05:302013-04-19T02:52:19.519+05:30Can I kill Shyam Manohar Jha- the root of all trou...Can I kill Shyam Manohar Jha- the root of all troubles??<br /><br />Hated Buaji too..how cunningly she made Khushi quiet.<br /><br />Will the engagement really happen? Hope no..<br />Looking forward to your next updatenishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07257605188667360623noreply@blogger.com