Part 65
“Lavanya ji…
who…. Gunshot…. Tha… na? “ She waved a teddy excitedly to show Lavanya what she
won in busting the balloons game…! She
had played with the little Lad. Lavanya
hid behind ASR and Khushi froze looking at his face. “Gunshot!” triggered his rage.
“KAHAN GAYI
THI TUM? Where had you
been?” Came a question. Khushi gaped at him confused straightening
herself up. He was waiting for her
answer.
“ASR! I told you,
excursion….!” Lavanya had no courage to speak further looking at his stone like
expressions. Khushi gaped from Lavanya
to ASR. He had not moved an inch.
“KISE POONCH
KAR GAYI THI? With whose permission?” Second stupid question according to
Khushi..! She gaped at him with a question on her face.. “Has he exchanged his
brain with mine?” She wondered.
“Answer me!” his
voice raised by a tone.
“ASR! I told you…
!” Lavanya again tried weakly. He still
had not moved and was staring at Khushi.
“YEAH AISE
KYUN GHOOR RAHA HAIN? Why is he
staring like that?” she thought gaping
with open mouth. She looked at Lavanya
for the answer. She looked scared…
! Khushi brought her gape from her to
him.
“Lavanya… go to
your room!” he ordered her in a deep deadly voice. Lavanya lingered for a second to defend Khushi.. but then losing
her courage, backed away.
Khushi looked at
her dress… nothing red she wore..! His left foot had gone back.
“YEH
SAAND ABHI HAMAIN
JAMINDOST KARANE AAYEGAA…! This bull will attach
anytime…! “ she thought taking
her left foot back. Khushi got warned…!
“WOH… I went on
the excursion trip!” she said at once trying to stop him..
“KISAKE SAATH? With whom?” he asked still not moving. She felt little relieved. She tried to gauge his level of rage and
smiled at him.
“MAINE POONCHA,
KISAKE SAATH ?” he came on to her like a bison. She ducked in fright. He caught her.
“Why are you so
angry…? Lavanya ji and y..you…!” she
couldn’t complete. He gripped her in
rage and shook her vigorously, sending all the shopping bags in the air. She swayed like a doll.
“To Hell with
your Ji and Sir!” he pushed her back.
She gaped, unable to understand the cause of his rage.
“I…I just wanted
you two to….!” She started of weakly to
justify.
“You wanted…. You
wanted ? Who are you, Khushi Kumari Gupta? “ he asked under the breath. She tried to free herself.
“CHODIYE HAMAIN…!” She tried with all her
might….
“I …. I just
wanted to give you some moments with Lavanya ji!” she said in one breath and
looked at him expectantly. She knew
after hearing this, his rage will subside.
His grip on her shoulder became bone crushing.
“You wanted us?
Or you wanted to take this opportunity…?” he left his sentence incomplete
spitting rage. She didn’t understand. Her shoulder hurt badly. She winced in pain.
“What are you
saying…?” she was blank.
“Tell me..! Who
was with you?” he asked her.
“KYA? Many people…!” she said looking at him.
“Yesterday, you
were bugged up with his stalking… and today you seemed to be enjoying his
company?” he accused. She wrenched
herself free.
“I don’t
understand! What are you talking about?” she said with tears. He gripped her…
“Or is it that
you have taken fancy for white skin? Foreigner? Your down market choice…!” she pushed him
back with rage.
“What?” she was
trembling with anger.
“Yesterday you
had no money for recharge… And what is all this?” he pointed at the shopping
scattered everywhere. She came a step
back looking at him thoroughly hurt. He
had gone beyond noticing.
“Who were you
with, Khushi? Who gave you the money?” he asked disdainfully, completing his
kill.
She paced
backwards. Arnav froze with his own
statement. She stood there clenching
her fists and then blew her head off like erupting volcano. She pushed the cane chair with all her
might, which slid on the floor and hit the other end, crashing the things on
the way.
“Stop it!” she
yelled and darted to her room.
“Khushi…!” he
raised his hand.
********* *********
Khushi banged
open the door. Lavanya was pacing
nervously. “Khushi…!” she blurted. Khushi didn’t look at her and sat on the
cough panting with uneven breath.
Lavanya came and sat next to her without a word. She had not seen this side of ASR..She was
scared to the core…! She felt for Khushi… She knew what Khushi went
through. She felt a surge of pain
reflecting Khushi’s plight.
She held Khushi’s
hand and sat there for a long time.
Khushi was lost. Even her tears had left her, leaving her eyes
burning. She gazed blankly with a stone
face. The wicked magician had turned
her into stone, snatching away her soul from her body.
She did not
understand what was more hurtful… his whipping words or the presence of Lavanya
when he was taking out all his anger on her.
Lavanya sat with Khushi on the couch not knowing how to console
her. She jest held Khushi’s hand and
gazed unfocused.
********* *********
****
ASR had turned
himself into Stone standing like a statue with the shopping bags scattered all
around. He turned his back and went to
his suite. He sat on the couch with a
thud and banged his head back.
“What have I
said..?” he didn’t understand his own feelings. “What was more tormenting?
She going on excursion with other people, or she going without his
permission leaving him alone with Lavanya!
He had done the damage. He had
hurt her beyond repair. He gazed
unfocused in the darkness without switching the lights on. He closed his eyes, with the darkness
filling his heart.
********** *******
Khushi pushed
back her hair from her forehead, gathered the waist length silky wavy hair and
tied in a hair band. Lavanya gaped at
her. She got up and came out. Walking down the verandah, she came to the
spot. She started collecting the
shopping bags putting the things neatly into the bags. Lavanya came to her help. She brought in everything, except the basket
of plants, took out a huge cotton bag
from the luggage. She took out a key
chain and held it out to Lavanya. The
wooden charismas tree shape with letters ASR carved on it. Lavanya took it and smiled. “That carver was doing it for everyone. I bought this for you..! its inexpensive..!”
Khushi spoke for the first time after an hour.
“This is
beautiful, Khushi!” Lavanya took it in both her hands… then said brightly..
“Chamakili, show
me your shopping!!” Khushi’s eyes brightened up.
“Come on, let us
open your Pandora’s box..!” Lavanya was excited…! She pulled all her shopping
bags closer….!
****** **********
ASR opened his
eyes with a start and looked at the time.
He ordered for black coffee and came out, a cane basket with two earthen
pots with etched and sculpted faces on its surface… one male with long mustache
and the other female face with big eyes.
Two beautiful plants loomed out of these pots. He picked up the basket
and brought it in. He gazed at the
plants closely, keeping the basket on the table.
One was a Clivia
plant with yellow flowers blooming as a bundled yellow ball. “ Clivia….I do not
have this in my collection!” He looked
at the tag. The other one was a cluster
of three sensitive plants. (Touch me not!) with pink and red tiny flowers
peeping out. His eyes twinkled. He touched the leaf and it shrunk… shutting
close its leaves tightly together. His
heart ached. “No!” he tried to hold the
plant with his palms and all the leaves shut tightly like a shockwave… “No,
Khushi…!” he tried to open the leaves forcibly in anguish.. They remained
tightly shut.
“No..!” he turned
back. Left his coffee on the table with the plants and went inside to get
ready.
He came out ready
to leave and glanced at the plants. The
leaves were back to normal plopping merrily with the breeze. His lips curled up in a lopsided smile
brightening up his face. He bent down..
“ MAIN TUMHAIN
MANAA LUNGAA, KHUSHI
! I will… I will bring back your
smile…!” he mumbled and tickled the leaf fondly. It shrunk and shut closed, shying away. It looked more like a girl shying away, than a plant. He picked up the basket and kept it with his
luggage.
“Lavanya.. we are
leaving in ten minutes..! he picked up his cold coffee mug and opened the newspaper,
waiting to leave for Delhi. “Driver and
Maid…!” he smirked…!
22 comments:
Hello everyone...
Not going to thank individually today. I am overwhelmed with your response and I am sorry to keep you waiting for the next update.
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Poke me not! and will post the update soon.. if you all comment on this update...! Waiting...!
Bye bye for now
Khushifan
just read it. first numbness hit me when kushi is being tortoured, but recovered when she smiled and recovered , but instead of hating asr you made him vulnerable to all of us with the plants which not only soothed him but also us immensely.
only i could say iss emotions ko kya naam doon?
AWESOME
ab ruthna manana shuru..hehe..khushi is khushi afterall..thins about everyone but herself..loved the update dear.
Beautiful.. pls make arnav do somethin spcl fr her widout lavanya and widout any serius fights.. pls..
Njoid reading the update :)
"MAIN TUMHAIN MANAA LOONGAA, KHUSHI"......bechara lover boy!....loved your metaphors....both the hurt and shyness being compared with the plant.....she bought him plants that he didn't have in his garden.....really thoughtful.....it would be the first time he would indulge in a "Khushi Manao" task directly...she surely has watched some real bull fights....always prepared!....how many names has he earned for himself.....she herself might find hard to track them all....
and since I have commented on this update......I earn rights to request for the next update soon as promised!
Fabulous! ASR repenting....cannot wait for the next update! Glad to see LV changing and showing concern for K. I'm hooked to this story. Fabulous writing as always.
SB
Sorry for not commenting on the last few updates - they were brilliant!
SB
Hi khushifan
Read it now and inspite of feeling sad for khushi I am very happy today because of ASR's attitude towards khushi at end. The more you give the updates , more thankful we are. And one more thing khushifan you don't know how much you are close to my heart. Anyway thank you so much for ur lovely amazing and brilliant story. Keep going
Remya
Hey khushifan i have been reading but didnt have time to put my comment every day at office after lunch i check for your update and feel very happy seeing one and this one was truly awesome thank you and ASR and the conversation between the plat or either khushi was impressive why does he have to hurt her and she forgets everything the next second. supperb keep posting looots of love
hi KF,
loved khushi's thoughtfulness of getting gifts to both, n arnie addressing plant as khushi n conversing with it is so unique to his character. quite happy reading ur update waiting to see how d driver n maid travel back
hi KF,
loved khushi's thoughtfulness of getting gifts to both, n arnie addressing plant as khushi n conversing with it is so unique to his character. quite happy reading ur update waiting to see how d driver n maid travel back
comparing d plant with khushi was really cute.. waiting 4 more.. 2day plzzz
hey KF ! Long time ! Sorry couldn't comment these days and i can't promise regular comments in the coming time too as my board exams are approaching and i would have to limit my internet hours ! So sorry in advance ! The updates are coming on very well !
This one too was amazing ! I won't criticize ASR again coz i seriously didn't expect anything else from him . This man is the limit ! But i'm glad khushi stood up again and gathered herself nicely . The gradual change u are showing in lavanya is very good , slow yet certain !
Lets see how does arnav cheer khushi up !
I hope khushi doesn't forgive him easily! Pretty please! I want him to repent!
SB
devil was back in action turning them into stones even himself... loved d way khushi pushed d chair showing her hurt...
oh i loved d changes with lavanya... "what was more hurtful"... whatever it is our khushi wont change for others.. she is always our khushi...
liked d way she collected all her shopping things except dat pots... apt gifts for lavanya & arnav... i really enjoyed d comparison of khushi's hurt with those shrunken leaves.. oh am waiting for the driver & maid return journey.. also hw he's going to bring her smile back... loved it dear...
Brilliant part..WICKED magician turned khushi into stone..bull another nickname..loved the khushi gift for la and arnav..comparision of khushi's and shruken leaves s so gud..bond with la and khushi s n one step ahead n nanital trip
Sharmi
Fantabalous and Flabberghast wen u comparing of senstive palnts and comparison to Khushi. Great applaus 4 for that. Khushi, she cnt sit quite and it was prooved. Unspoken Khushi made ASR to realise his big mistake. Bull and Red dress!!Wonderfull.
touch-me-not and khushi,only for ASR I guess
Y only one update per day?? :(
If we think we do not react well it wrong sometimes from loved ones? Very interesting how they describe the tension between two clouds that seem to be ciocnes and sparks fly ...
Okay, so I was dreading reading today's update, as I thought it would be something similar to the scene after Heer Rajna. Hope idiotic ASR makes it up to poor Khushi big time : )
Another great update Khushifan, waiting for tomorrow's update....kkg fan
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