Part 100
“Khushiiii…. Why are you so
late?” Buwaji came on to her like a bulldozer.
Khushi winced in fright. It was
almost ten thirty when she reached home.
She had walked down all the distance.
The reality had not synced in yet.
She looked at Buwaji blankly.
“Aray… Kuch Toh
Bolo!” Buwaji shook her and “Huh..?” Khushi looked at her holding her
breath. Payal came forward..
“Khushi, Chal Under! Come in,
Khushi!” She took her inside. Khushi
went to the bathroom. When she came out,
Payal had laid the table and was waiting for her. Khushi had no apatite.
“Khushi, why were you not
picking up the phone?” Payal asked and Khushi looked at her. She had forgotten that she had switched off
her phone.
“Woh… S..sorry, I had switched
it off!” she said guiltily staring
unfocused.
“Khushi…! What are you doing?
Why are you dipping the poori in water?” Payal held her hand tightly and Khushi
looked at the poori in her hand. She had
dipped it in the glass. Khushi kept the
poori aside.
“Jiji, bhookh nahi hain! I
want to sleep!” she said weakly.
“Khushi? What happened? Are
you ok?” Payal cupped Khushi’s face.
Khushi’s eyes were burning. She
closed her eyes. “I am fine, Jiji..!” she
said and got up joining her hands to the leftover food in her plate. She had never left the food in her
plate. But everything was different
today. She couldn’t forget the afternoon. Every moment was magical for her. For the first time in her life she had this
sensation of being touched by a
man. She was all lost. And then that letter… She didn’t know how to
react.
She drew blanket over her head
… she had forgotten to pray her devi mayya.. even her promise to go to the
temple. She had forgotten the world
around. She needed a sound sleep to wake
up to reality. She just shut her eyes
closed on this world.
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********”
“Good night, Khushi Kumari
Gupta!” Arnav smirked drawing the blanket.
He closed his eyes.. his lopsided smile still on…
“You will know soon… !” he
blurted. The hazel green confused eyes
gazed at him. Her blushing face floated
in the air.. The soft creamy feel of her cheeks made him stroke his stubble ..!
He sat up with a jerk. “That was all
fake…!” he said to himself. Her dupatta
tickled him, the soft silky wavy hair slipped from his fingers…! “No!” he got
down and came out to the pool side. He
saw her face in the reflection of the moon in his pool. “No!” he splashed water distorting the
reflection. Her giggle rang in his ears…
he came in to the room. He looked at the
side table.. Guava was gaping along with his wallet, pen, Bluetooth, keys and her
note..! He picked up the guava!
“This coquet will teach you a
lesson of your life. Khushi Kumari Gupta! The game begins…!” he gazed wickedly
at the note. “I will turn your weapon on
you! Trying to trap whoever you lay your eyes on? Huh? “ he gripped the guava.
“Why?” her hazel eyes asked
him in anguish! He couldn’t bear the gaze.
He turned off the lights and the darkness engulfed. He felt better. For a very long time he stared unfocused at
the ceiling. Then picking up the pillow
and pressing it to his chest, closed his eye trying to sleep.
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*********
She was standing at the threshold of her house, holding guavas in her
dupatta! A bright sun shone
outside. She looked ahead at the
woods. The mysterious woods … I want to
go… I want to see what is in there… I want to explore…! She looked back in her
house.. a cool shade gave her the feeling of protection. She smiled picking up her bag… “No Khushi..
you don’t know the road.. don’t go!” Payal pulled her back. Guavas spilled all over, few in the house and
few over the threshold! She didn’t bother to pick them up! She looked at her
babuji who folded his arms.. I want to go! She was determined to walk on the
unknown path…
“I may get flowers… !” she was hopeful…”What if you get thorns?” Payal
was skeptical.
“All the glory comes from daring to begin…!” she heard babuji’s words..
“Jiji, chalo naa! I want to explore that dream world!” Khushi stepped
out in sunlight and Payal still lingered.
“No, Please Don’t go!.. You may find a way to come back!” Payal
shouted. Khushi, standing in bright
sunlight, narrowed her eyes to look at her babuji. He was waving at her… “Babuji… !” she
screamed in excitement…! She was leaving her cozy world behind and plunging
into a new world…!
Khushi turned in her sleep blurting.. “I will walk on that unknown path
to enter that unknown world.. all by
myself… to find myself in someone…!” The guavas were left behind!
“Stop it Khushi..! Shut your
mouth up!” Payal slapped her irritably turning in her sleep.
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“Khushi…Khushi…!” Amma was
banging on the door. Payal woke up with
a start and hurriedly opened the door.
Khushi followed..
“Your babuji..!” Amma was frightened to the
core. Khushi dashed to the room. He was floundering gasping for breath… He had
vomited all over… His eyes rolled up… His right hand had twitched in an awkward
position. Khushi ran forward…
“Babuji…!” she called out
holding his hand. He didn’t
respond. “Call the doctor..!” she
yelled.
“Call Sham Babua!” Buwaji went
hurriedly to the phone. Payal tried
calling the nearby doctor. Khushi came
out running.
“Jiji.. rub his hands and
feet. Clean him…! I will call the ambulance..!” She didn’t know, how long it
will take. Ambulance arrived in an hour
.. Babuji’s health had deteriorated further… he was unable to close his eyes…
water streaming down his eyes… he couldn’t move a muscle. Paramedic took over and they all accompanied
babuji to the hospital.
Buwaji was frantically trying
for Sham. He was not picking up!
The emergency treatment had
started. Khushi asked Payal to be
there. She was running around to make
arrangements.
“Sir.. I am sorry! They asked
me to talk to you…” Khushi knocked the
door of RMO. He looked up.
“Sir my father is
admitted. We are asked to deposit
money. I mean.. I don’t have it.. but I
will arrange in the morning.!” She said
in one breath.
“Yeah ok! Don’t you have
insurance?” he asked. She shook her
head.
“Ok! But please deposit the
money immediately!” He said picking up the form to sign. She took the form and came out. The treatment had started. She calculated. She could withdraw some money she had saved
still would fall short! She didn’t know
what to do. Payal had not stopped crying
so was Amma. Only Buwaji was sitting on
the chair, muttering “Call sham Babua,
he will do something, Nandkishore..!”
“Stop it Buwaji, he is not
picking up the phone..!” Khushi was irritated.
Should I call sir? She threw away the thought jerking back her
head. She pulled Payal aside.
“Jiji.. stop crying.. there is
no time to cry.. we have to do something..! We have to arrange for
money..! I can withdraw some but we have
to arrange at least eighty thousand for his treatment.
“Khushi I have saved some ..!”
Payal calculated. “should I ask Aakash
sir?” she too brushed away the thought.
Buwaji was still trying Sham’s number.
Khushi didn’t know what to do..!
“Jiji, I have some gold!” she
finally decided. “Amma’s gold!” she
said. Payal held her hand.
“No Khushi.. its your Amma’s
gold! Don’t sell it!” Payal said.
“No! Jiji, I am selling it… I
will take loan on that! You get the cash in two hours… I had read the
advertisement..” she said determined and payal nodded.
“Khushi we need to go home..!
but..! Ok I will stay here. You go home.
.. pickup my bangles and Zumkaas too and arrange for money. Its six.
Get tea for Buwaji and Amma. Once
you come I will go home ..!” Payal planned and Khushi nodded. Payal had regained her composure, determined
to face the crises.
“Haan.. Nandkishore…Hello Sham
Babua..!” Buwaji was loud enough. She
narrated the story.
“They are asking money to
deposit..!” she was sure that Sham would do some arrangement.
“Umm.. Buwaji I am not in town… I am sorry.. but I will try
to come and arrange something.. you don’t worry, everything will be alright…!”
he said and Buwaji nodded looking up at
Khushi.
“Give the phone Buwaji..!”
Khushi held out her hand and switched it off.
Sham disconnected the phone
thinking.. “If I go now.. I will have to pay the bills… If he is dying his own
death…why should I..? ” he smirked wickedly.
“Humm… Good bye, uncleji..!” he stroked his fist and licked his
lips.
“Raani Sahebaa!” he called out
and Anjali walked in. “Let’s go out for
lunch..!” he wrapped his arms around her.
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********
“Aray.. Khushi bitiya didn’t
come!” Nani was surprised. They were to
plan for the navaratri. Arnav looked up,
so did sham. Both smirked for different
reasons.
“Yeah Nani.. I will call her!”
said Anjali picking up her phone.
“Her cell is switched off… no
one is picking up the landline..!” she said looking little worried. Arnav too looked up at his Di.
“She won’t come!” he thought
and got up.
“Aray, Chote, you didn’t eat
your breakfast..!” Anjali pointed out.
“No! I will eat guava!” he
blurted and stopped dead!
“What?” Anjali asked
bewildered.
“Nothing Di, I will order
something in the office. I need to go!”
he strode back to his room.
****** ******
********
The news spread in the office…
Khushi was cleared off all the charges.
Everyone was waiting for her. She
didn’t turn up. Rekha tried her number
several times.. So did Aman.
“Sir.. Ms Gupta has not come…
not reachable on phone..!” Aman said standing in ASR’s cabin. ASR smirked…
“She will not! She is relieved
from the job yesterday..!” he said coolly and turned to his laptop. Aman was shocked. “What?”
“Yes, I cleaned up the dirt!”
ASR looked straight at Aman.
“So the sealed envelope was
her relieving letter..!” he thought descending the stairs. ASR’s eyes followed Aman till her cubical… His
eyes locked down at her cubical.. he had got it cleared. The empty space gaped at him. He turned to his system. The smirk had disappeared.
“Umm Bhai..!” Aakash came
in. “Umm.. No one is picking up the
phone in the house…!” he said. Arnav got
up with a jerk.
“What? What happened? Where is
Ram Prakash?” he asked at once. Aakash
shook his head.
“No bhai, I am talking about
Payal ji!” he said sitting on the chair.
ASR’s expression changed.
“You came here to tell me
this?” he was annoyed. “No.. I mean.. I
am worried.. she was to give me the samples..!” Aakash said weakly.
“Stop it Aakash… forget the
samples…I had warned you..!” he flared up.
Aakash got up from the chair and went out without a word. His eyes again turned to the empty
cubical. “Damn it!” he blurted and
picking up his laptop moved towards conference room to resume his work there!
“She can’t have any effect on
me! She is nobody!” he commanded himself denying his own feelings, his brain taking
over his heart! There should be a successful takeover! Failure was not an
option for Arnav Singh Raizada!
He had pulled through the day
without her, somehow!
His phone rang! He knew! “Yeah,
Regi, the news is correct! I eradicated the trouble!” he barked.
“Eradicated? Have you? Really?”
Regi tried to control his temper and asked in a low deadly tone. There was no response.
“ASR.. “ Regi couldn’t
continue..”Stop it Regi! If you have called up to discuss her, I am
disconnecting..!” he snapped. There was
a silence from the other side. He looked
at the screen.
“I am sorry, ASR! Actually I called
up to thank you for relieving her!” came a very calm statement from Regi. ASR’s mouth fell open. He waited.
“You did a big favor, ASR! She
will be able to take care of her father well!” he again stopped. ASR waited.
“Yeah! That’s right, ASR… her
father suffered a stroke and is critical..she will be…”
“What?” ASR
asked in shock. “Regi…!”
“Stop it,
ASR! You have already eradicated…! So don’t bother!” Regi disconnected. Arnav froze..!
“Khushi….!”
His heart called out in anguish!
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*******
“What? What
are you doing, Nandkishore? Where are you taking him?” Buwaji was in
shock. Khushi looked on…
“Buwaji..!”
she held her hand.
“We have to
shift him to ICU!” the stretcher had moved… Khushi dashed to the doctor.
“Doctor..!”
she chocked.
“Don’t
worry! We are shifting him. Let us see!”
she nodded and sat on the chair watching the arrangements, for a long time!
She dialed
Aman’s number… “Umm sir, I mean … can I collect the check now? I mean.. I know
.. I will get it at month end… but… !” she asked hopefully. Aman looked at his empty cabin.
“umm.. I
don’t know.. I will do something.. Don’t worry…!” Aman had already decided to
pay from his pocket, without ASR’s permission.
“No! its ok
sir, I will manage! .. Umm sir, please…
don’t.. tell him that I had called for money!” she requested. A lump formed in Aman’s throat! “Ye.. yes!” he assured.
******** *******
“Get these
medicines.. Immediately..!” the nurse ordered and rushed in. Khushi looked at the long list, clutching her
bag she went to the pharmacy. The
medicines were delivered. She waited for
the bill.
“Bill?” she
asked nervously, praying her devi mayya and touching the bundle of notes in the
bag.
“Paid!”
came a rude answer and she turned puzzled.
When she came with the medicines, she found Sham sitting next to Buwaji
holding her hand. She handed over the
medicines without a word and sat at the corner.
She went in to see her babuji.
His ventilators were removed but oxygen mask was still on.
“Babuji.. !”
she called in a small voice. Tear rolled
down the corner of his eye. She held his
hand and sat there for a long time.
Doctors came in for a round..
“He is out
of danger now… we will shift him to the private room in a day or so!” Doctors
assured and she felt better.
“Who paid
the bill?” the puzzle was not solved.
“Sham ji? Did
you pay the bill?” she asked directly.
He looked shocked for a second and then he smiled politely.
“Does it
really matter, who paid the bill?” he asked her holding her hand.
“Aur Nahi
Toh Kaa Nandkishore! He only has paid.. who else will
pay?” buwaji had all the praises for Sham.
Khushi withdrew her hand. “Thank
you!” Sham tried to put his hand around her shoulder.
“I will go
get coffee for you!” she dashed out to the coffee shop! She went to the billing
section to know the credit limit..! She
had to arrange the money somehow!
“Don’t worry
madam… things are arranged..!” she was told.
“Sham ji did all this?” she was surprised. Her tummy growled. “No barking please, kutteji!” she held her
tummy tightly.
********* *******
“Khushi…!”
Rekha called out. She came and hugged
Khushi. Khushi’s eyes filled with
tears.
“Khushi..
don’t worry! Everything will be alright!” the office staff had gathered around
Khushi outside ICU. Buwaji and Amma
gaped at the crowd. Her amma broke into
tears looking at the concerned faces of the people around. Rekha came forward. “Don’t worry, Maaji… he will be alright! And
please don’t worry about anything..! We all are there!” she assured looking at
her colleagues. They all were there to
help Khushi. Khushi smiled faintly. “Thank you!” she was overwhelmed.
“Khushi..!”
Aman whispered and Khushi said “No! Aman sir! Everything is arranged…!” she
knew what he wanted to tell.
“Khushi…
don’t hesitate.. if you need anything..Just call us! Ok?” Rekha cupped her face and she
nodded. Buwaji gaped at their
overwhelming love towards Khushi. She
really had a magic wand.
else was
watching this scene from RMO’s office with moist eyes. He was proud of his Khushi Kumari Gupta!!
********* ********
****
He was in
the ICU. It was almost eleven in the
night. Khushi and Payal were dozing off
on the chair outside ICU.
Babuji
looked at him. He came forward. “Don’t worry!” he said with moist eyes. Then holding babuji’s hand said…
“I bought
your house! But will always be in your name! “ Babuji’s eyes were
expressionless except the tears rolling down.
“Don’t
worry about her!” he said and strode out in the darkness of the corridors…!
Nobody had seen this side of ASR except Babuji who was
muted with paralytic stroke!! Nobody would ever know!!
49 comments:
Hello
I was overwhelmed with your comments...
and anguished while writing this episode.(the emotions were overwhelming for me too! I couldn't bear their anguish!!)
Hope i am able to convey what i wanted to...
keep reading... thank you for all your support and wishes and encouragement..
Please please comment on this episode..
Many of my friends wanted a long update.. so here it is! Hope you have patience to read through. Hope i am not boring...!
Love you all
KF
Khushifan...Congrats on the century!....Loved ASR-Regi conversation.....ASR kneeling down to reality!......even though nobody would ever know ASR-Babuji interaction....can't say 'interaction'....more of a monosyllable ....glad that it happened!.....
o.k ..challenge for you.....dare to bore us!....
Even IPK 100th episode had the hospital scene......difference here is that she didn't cry on his shoulders..she hasn't realized who paid...wonder whether she would ever...and if so, then when?....
You have successfully managed to bring out all the emotions and anguishes in the right amount through your writing.....thank you very much..
u fit so many things into one single update..though there are many plots but I have gone through series of emotions while reading this..i cant name them sorry..i will never be able to..that is the reason they are named as emotions / feelings..
Oh god how can you even say it would be boring to read long updates its always the readers pleasure to read long updates and congrats on reaching the century 100!!! yeheeee
And ASR wow nobody has seen this side of ASR except Babuji i can feel every agony every bit of the story and emotion that you have tried to convey to us
Thank you for the wonderful update and waiting to know how he would take care of khushi
He relieved her from every duty..
no this is not done... atleast they shud know who paid the bill...
pls no engagement for khushi and shyam.. give some twist in buaji's nature..and her likeliness for shyam.!!
please twists needed in the storyline regarding arnav n khushi getting together and shyam getting his share of being out of anjali's life..
nd a real anguish and emotion filled update.. hats off to your writing.. loved it :)
Oh my! I couldn't control my tears...Just speechless. A very fitting episode, 100th one!Kya baat hai, KF ji! Brilliantly portrayed,and that too in ONLY one episode. Love and lots of hugs. Take a bow as I accord you with a standing ovation! God bless ALWAYS dear KF.
Hey Khushifan!!
Congratulations on ur century!! You've really done a great job so far!! Felt sorry for both Khushi & Arnav today. Quite an emotional update!!! Glad to see this side of Arnav though probably no one will see it for a very long tym. When can we get rid of Sham babua & him taking undue credit?? Kutteji has been barking & growling for quite long!! Well, keep writing. Great work!! Tc.
Oh, by the way ASR assures babuji, "Don't worry about her." How does he know that he is worrying about her? Another sleepless night...DAMN IT! <3
yo yo we reached century
CONGRAGULATIONS MY DEAR.
i dont know why my eyes got moist
kushi is no more in the office.what will he do now?i am angry on ASR
arnav near babuji-kushi and payal dossing
HE IS THE MAN WHO COMES IN LONINESS
Congrats..100 chapters..century:-):-P
..luved asr concern for babuji..:-)
loved the senti and emotional update. Want Khushi to know soon that it is ASR and not Shyaam who paid the bill Their romance and torment was too shortlived......
awaiting
dvdv
KF , congratulations for 100th post of Opposite poles. I'm glad to be here to read this and to wish u. On the update....hey you 'd matched this 100th with hospital episode....hug is missing...but very emotional one. Felt bad for poor Khushi. Got irritated with Asr & his fake act... But at the end u made him blessing in disguise...anyways our hero is like that....not a normal one....his heroic acts are in drankness....loved Khushi in this , also Payal......looking forward...
congrats on the century episode,so the awakening of K has started,but she still thinks that snake paid the bills,what does ASR mean dont worry about her,he cant hav it both ways can he
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god when i finished reading this i terribly nead water to clear the lump that formed in my throat what a update .but only thing that is not bearable this idiotic sham taking all the credits .no one will ever come to know this side of babuji pls make khushi to know about this fact by some how.This is about you dear khushifan what a writer man your are you are making me feel all those pain .hats off to you dear i think this is my longest comment .it was a perfect 100 update .superb superb superb.waiting for next update having little hope that khushi will see when asr exit the room .and thank you for this amazing update
Congrats! It was a perfect century update. Still am holding various emotions inside me. Words were not formed to praise it, but my heart words still presents, which was unknown language to all even myself too!
First of CONGRATULATIONS DI !!!! And thanku for the longer updates....
LOVED LOVESD LOVED the last update and this one too..... Brought tears to my eyes....
Aur i have more requests di.....
Unlike the serial i would really like if u could make khushi repay arnav .... U r KHUSHI FAN .... In the serial she was really degraded.... I want her with self esteem.... I mean v know whats in store for her... I dont want her indebted to asr...
Thank u ....
And God bless
Keep on writing
And DONT ever think that u bore us :-)
oh dear.. felt that anguish... u know my eyes were filled wit tears wen i finished reading... am simply speechless... so many emotions... i dont know wat to say...
whether khushi's walk... not hungry... that letter.. her lost state... arnav's smirk.. gaping guava.. weapon on her.. am sure it will backfire him.. u will eat guava.. how...
he's clearly couldnt able to bear that someone has proposed her.. he wants her to feel his pain...
khushi's dream... wow.. oh dear.. babuji... felt like as if am worrying to arrange money.. mmm so regi told asr.. he arranged everything.. but dat idiot shyam.. arghhh.. oh buwaji.. let her know d truth dat arnav had paid it...
aman, rekha and others.. luv u guys.. oh dear.. dat last part is really touchy... dis is wat called as a century update... my best wishes dear.. luv u..
Congratulations Khushifan for the 100th update...
I love reading you..you bring about the emotions of Arnav and Khushi beautifully...
KF, congratulations on your 100th episode! What a journey it has been till now .... And such an overwhelming 100th, truly befitting the exalted status it has ~. Rainqrazy
What a beautiful and heartfelt update! I did not realise that khushi was relieved from her post - why did she thank him? You can feel the anguish face by the family - you've spun an amazing story. I hope all at shantivan go to see khushi at the hosp. Angry regi, a concerned Rekha, a helpful aman - why can't asr see her effect on people? They love her for her! And arnav at the end.....I hope he sticks to his word.
Brilliant. Brilliant. Brilliant. My heart went out to khushi.
Congratulations on your 100th update - it is an amazing achievement and you should be so proud. It was again an inspired update - fitting for a century.
SB
First and foremost congratulations on your 100th episode, and a special thank you for taking us on the magical journey. I come home daily looking forward to your story, sorry I can;t comment everyday as I am sometimes on my Bleckberry and it does not let me post.
Was concered yesterday when he was being so nice to her. Why did her relieve her and what was in the letter. Was happy that he paid her bill, but wodering if she will find out.....nd he told Babuji he bought the house and don't worry about her...strange considering he just relieved her .....kkg fan
Hi , this is the first time I am writing . First of all congrats on completing ur century... I have always been a great fan of ur stories.. You are excellent in writing. Story is coming up really well...please continue ...will wait for every update eagerly
outstanding achievement. 100 chapters...........congrats
Thank you Khushifan for a long and wonderful update. It was very emotional for me. I wonder how you felt writing it. Please don't continue this suspense of who paid the hospital bills bcoz I do not want Sham to get any praise. Please!!!
Congratulations on 100 updates... and best wishes for many more!!! I will wait for the next one eagerly.
congrats on completing ur century.I have always been a great fan of ur stories All the best and
waiting for ur update
He always ends up hurting her and next minute regretting. Loved your 100th episode. As usual you are a fanatstic writer. Waiting for more.
congrats on 100th episode.it was awesome!!!!
waiting for more updates
Congrats on the 100 episode, thx for giving us this story
Congratulations on 100 updates...it is just like 100 episode of IPKKND...you really are a very-very good writer...my best wishes...
what happened dear are u ok i have really checked more than 100 times till now
what happened..how come no update today.. i checked so many times from the morning:(
what happened dear.2 days yar.i am sitting infront of my system looking 4 ur update
di are u ok??
Are you ok KF?
SB
What happened KF???? no updates almost two days have passed. hope u do good...
Hello Everyone!
Thank you for all your concern. I just took a break yesterday after 100 episodes.
Will be back soon. Please keep reading and loving me like this only!
Bye
Love
KF
sorry i was not able to comment for the past few updates.wat to say as usual u r amazing.and is ASR gonna fake love to khushi.my god i ll really go crazy thinking this.he sees her everywhere y this harvard educated sharp brainy DARK PRINCE is too dump to realise his feeling for his love.patha nahi wat he thinks of himself and khushi who shall resist her charm.as well as her being ferocious as a fire too even aluminium gold all kinds of metals melt in fire and stone is also not an exception.SO THIS CHOTTE S NOT A MATTER.but sumone pull out ASR's hair and tell him he s head over heels for this girl.and khushifan wow u know so many languages happy to hear.k take care god bless you but where are the updates
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ok di.. take rest and njoi ur break... :)
hey u guys watched the new show promo MODERN BAHU.. coming soon on sony... varu kapoor nd our khushi(sanaya irani).. Used to watch varun in humse hai life yaaron on V channel.. i loved him dere.. hope so he makes a gud pair wid sanaya..
i noticed waise... Sanaya.. first BARUN and now VARUN.. :p ;)
Khushifan(as per character's name and not literary meaning)... di now u can also be Chanchanfan... :) m just kidding...
write soon.. coz if we like VARUN+SANAYA... u will have to write another story!!
waiting......... for ur update.... :)
and i have commented 4th time.. guys dnt be irritated with me :)
You deserved a break after writing a hundred episodes esp. the 100th one! Hope you come back with a bang and delight us soon. Take care. God bless you with good health and happiness!
yaar, much needed break.we can understand. take ur time and come back with a bang......but missed reading ur updates...it has become daily activity....anyways....take care...eagerly waiting for your update...
ok u deserve a break after the effort u put in to give us a good time,thanks again,ur updates hav become a regular fixture of my life
please continue...
I love your creation, your characters and how you magnificient scenes. In this episode is so much beauty human, solidarity so that I feel like I wont "to mouve" in your story and you prepare for me people around me with a big hart...
Thank you for this good story
Congrats on 100th update..loved it
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