Thursday 31 January 2013

Opposite Poles..Part 65


Part 65

“Lavanya ji… who…. Gunshot…. Tha… na? “ She waved a teddy excitedly to show Lavanya what she won in busting the balloons game…!  She had played with the little Lad.  Lavanya hid behind ASR and Khushi froze looking at his face.  “Gunshot!” triggered his rage.

“KAHAN  GAYI  THI  TUM? Where had you been?”  Came a question.  Khushi gaped at him confused straightening herself up.  He was waiting for her answer.

“ASR! I told you, excursion….!” Lavanya had no courage to speak further looking at his stone like expressions.  Khushi gaped from Lavanya to ASR.  He had not moved an inch.  

“KISE   POONCH   KAR   GAYI   THI? With whose permission?”  Second stupid question according to Khushi..! She gaped at him with a question on her face.. “Has he exchanged his brain with mine?” She wondered.
“Answer me!” his voice raised by a tone.  
“ASR! I told you… !” Lavanya again tried weakly.  He still had not moved and was staring at Khushi.

“YEAH   AISE  KYUN   GHOOR   RAHA  HAIN? Why is he staring like that?”  she thought gaping with open mouth.  She looked at Lavanya for the answer.  She looked scared… !  Khushi brought her gape from her to him. 
“Lavanya… go to your room!” he ordered her in a deep deadly voice.  Lavanya lingered for a second to defend Khushi.. but then losing her courage, backed away.  

Khushi looked at her dress… nothing red she wore..! His left foot had gone back. 
 “YEH   SAAND  ABHI   HAMAIN   JAMINDOST  KARANE   AAYEGAA…! This bull will  attach  anytime…!  “ she thought taking her left foot back.  Khushi got warned…!

“WOH… I went on the excursion trip!” she said at once trying to stop him..
“KISAKE   SAATH? With whom?”  he asked still not moving.  She felt little relieved.  She tried to gauge his level of rage and smiled at him. 
“MAINE  POONCHA,   KISAKE  SAATH  ?” he came on to her like a bison.  She ducked in fright.  He caught her.

“Why are you so angry…?  Lavanya ji and y..you…!” she couldn’t complete.  He gripped her in rage and shook her vigorously, sending all the shopping bags in the air.  She swayed like a doll. 
“To Hell with your Ji and Sir!” he pushed her back.  She gaped, unable to understand the cause of his rage.
“I…I just wanted you two to….!”  She started of weakly to justify.
“You wanted…. You wanted ? Who are you, Khushi Kumari Gupta? “ he asked under the breath.  She tried to free herself.  

“CHODIYE    HAMAIN…!” She tried with all her might…. 
“I …. I just wanted to give you some moments with Lavanya ji!” she said in one breath and looked at him expectantly.  She knew after hearing this, his rage will subside.  His grip on her shoulder became bone crushing.

“You wanted us? Or you wanted to take this opportunity…?” he left his sentence incomplete spitting rage.  She didn’t understand.  Her shoulder hurt badly.  She winced in pain.
“What are you saying…?” she was blank. 
“Tell me..! Who was with you?” he asked her. 
“KYA?  Many people…!” she said looking at him. 
“Yesterday, you were bugged up with his stalking… and today you seemed to be enjoying his company?” he accused.  She wrenched herself free. 
“I don’t understand! What are you talking about?” she said with tears.  He gripped her…
“Or is it that you have taken fancy for white skin? Foreigner? Your down market choice…!” she pushed him back with rage.
“What?” she was trembling with anger.

“Yesterday you had no money for recharge… And what is all this?” he pointed at the shopping scattered everywhere.  She came a step back looking at him thoroughly hurt.  He had gone beyond noticing. 
“Who were you with, Khushi? Who gave you the money?” he asked disdainfully, completing his kill.  

She paced backwards.  Arnav froze with his own statement.  She stood there clenching her fists and then blew her head off like erupting volcano.  She pushed the cane chair with all her might, which slid on the floor and hit the other end, crashing the things on the way.  

“Stop it!” she yelled and darted to her room. 
“Khushi…!” he raised his hand.

*********   *********
Khushi banged open the door.  Lavanya was pacing nervously.  “Khushi…!” she blurted.  Khushi didn’t look at her and sat on the cough panting with uneven breath.  Lavanya came and sat next to her without a word.   She had not seen this side of ASR..She was scared to the core…! She felt for Khushi… She knew what Khushi went through.   She felt a surge of pain reflecting Khushi’s plight.  

She held Khushi’s hand and sat there for a long time.  Khushi was lost. Even her tears had left her, leaving her eyes burning.  She gazed blankly with a stone face.  The wicked magician had turned her into stone, snatching away her soul from her body.  

She did not understand what was more hurtful… his whipping words or the presence of Lavanya when he was taking out all his anger on her.  Lavanya sat with Khushi on the couch not knowing how to console her.  She jest held Khushi’s hand and gazed unfocused.  

*********   *********  ****
ASR had turned himself into Stone standing like a statue with the shopping bags scattered all around.  He turned his back and went to his suite.  He sat on the couch with a thud and banged his head back.

“What have I said..?” he didn’t understand his own feelings.  “What was more tormenting?  She going on excursion with other people, or she going without his permission leaving him alone with Lavanya!  He had done the damage.  He had hurt her beyond repair.  He gazed unfocused in the darkness without switching the lights on.   He closed his eyes, with the darkness filling his heart.  

**********  *******

Khushi pushed back her hair from her forehead, gathered the waist length silky wavy hair and tied in a hair band.  Lavanya gaped at her.  She got up and came out.  Walking down the verandah, she came to the spot.  She started collecting the shopping bags putting the things neatly into the bags.  Lavanya came to her help.  She brought in everything, except the basket of plants,  took out a huge cotton bag from the luggage.  She took out a key chain and held it out to Lavanya.  The wooden charismas tree shape with letters ASR carved on it.  Lavanya took it and smiled.  “That carver was doing it for everyone.  I bought this for you..! its inexpensive..!” Khushi spoke for the first time after an hour.

“This is beautiful, Khushi!” Lavanya took it in both her hands… then said brightly..
“Chamakili, show me your shopping!!” Khushi’s eyes brightened up.
“Come on, let us open your Pandora’s box..!” Lavanya was excited…! She pulled all her shopping bags closer….!

******   **********

ASR opened his eyes with a start and looked at the time.  He ordered for black coffee and came out, a cane basket with two earthen pots with etched and sculpted faces on its surface… one male with long mustache and the other female face with big eyes.  Two beautiful plants loomed out of these pots. He picked up the basket and brought it in.  He gazed at the plants closely, keeping the basket on the table.  

One was a Clivia plant with yellow flowers blooming as a bundled yellow ball. “ Clivia….I do not have this in my collection!”  He looked at the tag.  The other one was a cluster of three sensitive plants. (Touch me not!) with pink and red tiny flowers peeping out.  His eyes twinkled.  He touched the leaf and it shrunk… shutting close its leaves tightly together.  His heart ached.  “No!” he tried to hold the plant with his palms and all the leaves shut tightly like a shockwave… “No, Khushi…!” he tried to open the leaves forcibly in anguish.. They remained tightly shut.

“No..!” he turned back. Left his coffee on the table with the plants and went inside to get ready.
He came out ready to leave and glanced at the plants.  The leaves were back to normal plopping merrily with the breeze.  His lips curled up in a lopsided smile brightening up his face.  He bent down..

“ MAIN   TUMHAIN  MANAA    LUNGAA,   KHUSHI  !  I will… I will bring back your smile…!” he mumbled and tickled the leaf fondly.  It shrunk and shut closed, shying away.  It looked more like a girl shying away, than a plant.  He picked up the basket and kept it with his luggage.  

“Lavanya.. we are leaving in ten minutes..! he picked up his cold coffee mug and opened the newspaper, waiting to leave for Delhi.  “Driver and Maid…!” he smirked…!


22 comments:

Unknown said...

Hello everyone...

Not going to thank individually today. I am overwhelmed with your response and I am sorry to keep you waiting for the next update.

If you want to know what these plants are... visit "My Page!" on this blog.

Poke me not! and will post the update soon.. if you all comment on this update...! Waiting...!

Bye bye for now

Khushifan

anuradha said...

just read it. first numbness hit me when kushi is being tortoured, but recovered when she smiled and recovered , but instead of hating asr you made him vulnerable to all of us with the plants which not only soothed him but also us immensely.
only i could say iss emotions ko kya naam doon?

Anonymous said...

AWESOME

Dayavanti said...

ab ruthna manana shuru..hehe..khushi is khushi afterall..thins about everyone but herself..loved the update dear.

Sneha said...

Beautiful.. pls make arnav do somethin spcl fr her widout lavanya and widout any serius fights.. pls..
Njoid reading the update :)

Mymind said...

"MAIN TUMHAIN MANAA LOONGAA, KHUSHI"......bechara lover boy!....loved your metaphors....both the hurt and shyness being compared with the plant.....she bought him plants that he didn't have in his garden.....really thoughtful.....it would be the first time he would indulge in a "Khushi Manao" task directly...she surely has watched some real bull fights....always prepared!....how many names has he earned for himself.....she herself might find hard to track them all....

and since I have commented on this update......I earn rights to request for the next update soon as promised!

Anonymous said...

Fabulous! ASR repenting....cannot wait for the next update! Glad to see LV changing and showing concern for K. I'm hooked to this story. Fabulous writing as always.



SB

Anonymous said...

Sorry for not commenting on the last few updates - they were brilliant!

SB

Anonymous said...

Hi khushifan
Read it now and inspite of feeling sad for khushi I am very happy today because of ASR's attitude towards khushi at end. The more you give the updates , more thankful we are. And one more thing khushifan you don't know how much you are close to my heart. Anyway thank you so much for ur lovely amazing and brilliant story. Keep going
Remya

Anonymous said...

Hey khushifan i have been reading but didnt have time to put my comment every day at office after lunch i check for your update and feel very happy seeing one and this one was truly awesome thank you and ASR and the conversation between the plat or either khushi was impressive why does he have to hurt her and she forgets everything the next second. supperb keep posting looots of love

arshi said...

hi KF,
loved khushi's thoughtfulness of getting gifts to both, n arnie addressing plant as khushi n conversing with it is so unique to his character. quite happy reading ur update waiting to see how d driver n maid travel back

arshi said...

hi KF,
loved khushi's thoughtfulness of getting gifts to both, n arnie addressing plant as khushi n conversing with it is so unique to his character. quite happy reading ur update waiting to see how d driver n maid travel back

nikhi said...

comparing d plant with khushi was really cute.. waiting 4 more.. 2day plzzz

Unknown said...

hey KF ! Long time ! Sorry couldn't comment these days and i can't promise regular comments in the coming time too as my board exams are approaching and i would have to limit my internet hours ! So sorry in advance ! The updates are coming on very well !
This one too was amazing ! I won't criticize ASR again coz i seriously didn't expect anything else from him . This man is the limit ! But i'm glad khushi stood up again and gathered herself nicely . The gradual change u are showing in lavanya is very good , slow yet certain !
Lets see how does arnav cheer khushi up !

Anonymous said...

I hope khushi doesn't forgive him easily! Pretty please! I want him to repent!

SB

kalaiselvisblog said...

devil was back in action turning them into stones even himself... loved d way khushi pushed d chair showing her hurt...

oh i loved d changes with lavanya... "what was more hurtful"... whatever it is our khushi wont change for others.. she is always our khushi...

liked d way she collected all her shopping things except dat pots... apt gifts for lavanya & arnav... i really enjoyed d comparison of khushi's hurt with those shrunken leaves.. oh am waiting for the driver & maid return journey.. also hw he's going to bring her smile back... loved it dear...

Anonymous said...

Brilliant part..WICKED magician turned khushi into stone..bull another nickname..loved the khushi gift for la and arnav..comparision of khushi's and shruken leaves s so gud..bond with la and khushi s n one step ahead n nanital trip

Sharmi

Applecut said...

Fantabalous and Flabberghast wen u comparing of senstive palnts and comparison to Khushi. Great applaus 4 for that. Khushi, she cnt sit quite and it was prooved. Unspoken Khushi made ASR to realise his big mistake. Bull and Red dress!!Wonderfull.

smisham said...

touch-me-not and khushi,only for ASR I guess

Sneha said...

Y only one update per day?? :(

carmen bogdan said...

If we think we do not react well it wrong sometimes from loved ones? Very interesting how they describe the tension between two clouds that seem to be ciocnes and sparks fly ...

Anonymous said...

Okay, so I was dreading reading today's update, as I thought it would be something similar to the scene after Heer Rajna. Hope idiotic ASR makes it up to poor Khushi big time : )

Another great update Khushifan, waiting for tomorrow's update....kkg fan