Tuesday 19 March 2013

Opposite Poles..Part 109



Part 109

The driver was at the door and Arnav came down from his room.  Khushi was still at the table helping Anjali to prepare a list of shopping.  Lavanya was on the phone talking to her friend.  Mami had gone back to her room.  Nani ji was in the kitchen supervising over Ram Prakash. 
“Here is the address.  Arrange to take both the vehicles to the garage!” ordered Arnav and turned.
“Chalo!” he barked.  Anjali looked up.  Khushi still was trying to remember the things to be purchased.  

“Khushi!” he yelled,  taking a step forward.  Everyone startled.
“Chote?” Anjali was surprised at his furious face.  Khushi got up from the chair struggling.  Lavanya disconnected the phone.  Nani came out.
“Chalo!” he again said and Khushi looked back not knowing whom he was talking to.
“I am talking to you Khushi! I will drop you home!” he said finally.

“Wh..? Why?” She looked at the clock.  There was still time.  He waited.
“Woh... I have my scooter..!” She resisted.
“Yeah.. that broken down, scooter!” he said disdainfully walking towards her.  Khushi shrunk remembering her fall.

“What?” Anjali asked.
“Nothing, Anjali ji.  Woh... my scooter ... I mean.. brakes are not working... I mean..I couldn’t stop the vehicle..!” she started off weakly.
“Yeah! Stop the vehicle by colliding with the other..!” he again barked.
“What?” Anjali still had not understood.  Lavanya had dialled again to resume talks. 
“Woh.. Kuch nahi...!” Khushi looked at him angrily.

“Chalo!” he again ordered.  She took a step back.  “No! I can ride the scooter..!” she argued.
“Khushi bitiya, don’t ride the broken vehicle.  Go with him.  He will drop you home!” Nani advised and Khushi nodded reluctantly.
 
“Where is my scooter?” Khushi was shocked.  “Gone!” he said walking towards the car.
“Gone? Where? Police station? Why? I told you, I will pay for the damage! Why did you complain to the police..!” She couldn’t complete.
“Shut up!” he yelled.  “I have sent it to the garage..!” he said and she opened her mouth again to start off.
“Happy ji’s garage!” he clarified and she closed her gaping mouth.

“What? Where are we going?” she asked surprised looking around, when he took a different route.  He didn’t bother to answer her.  She looked at him angrily.  He stopped at the clinic.
“What? Why?” she was surprised.  He pulled her dupatta to expose her wound on her swollen elbow.
“This is why!” he said getting down.  She reluctantly got down.  He held her right hand and she winced in pain.  “Shhss!” he released his grip.

Chup Chap chalo!” he ordered walking with her. The Doctor checked her swollen elbow asking her to move her hand and fingers, and cleaned her minor bruises. “There seems to be no fracture.  Just an impact!” he said.

“Let us give her Tetanus vaccine!” the doctor took out a syringe and needle. Khushi looked at it in shock.


“What Suiii! Injection? Nooo!” she reflexively started walking towards the door.  He caught her left elbow.

“Shut up!” he said under his breath.

“No.. No injection..! Suii  Nahi  Lagavanii  Hain! Please... ” She was frightened to the core.

“I.. I get scared.. Please.. no syringe..!” she looked at him pleadingly.  He wrapped his arm around her shoulder.


“Chup chat Khadi Raho! Stand still!” he ordered.  She closed her eyes shut....”Ram Ram Ram Ram...!” she was praying wrapping her left hand around his.  He pulled her closer releasing her left hand from around his.  


“No!” she said on the verge of crying.  “You are a brave girl...!” the doctor said soothingly sucking the liquid from the bottle.  He had held her tightly.  The doctor applied spirit on her arm and Khushi sprang into action.  With a jerk she freed herself and ran towards the door.  He was quicker to grab her.


“No, please... Arnav ji.. i will take medicines.. please .. no injection..!” she struggled.

“Don’t worry.  You wouldn’t even notice..!” The doctor signalled ASR and he pressed her head on his chest. She closed her eyes in fright screaming silently.  The doctor had done his job.  Arnav and Khushi still were standing there with her head pressed against his chest.

“Done!” the doctor said pressing the cotton ball on her arm and they broke apart coming back to senses.


“Done?” she asked the doctor and turning to him angrily asked “Satisfied? You sadist! Doosaron  Ko  Sataanay  Main  Mazaa  Aataa   Hain  Na?” He smirked.  The doctor laughed. Her eyes twinkled with tears.


“Ok, Mr. Raizada.. I will give some pain killers.  If the swelling does not subside by tomorrow we will have to x-ray her elbow and put it in sling.  The doctor scared her more.  She barged out of the clinic.  ASR followed after five minutes by paying bill and buying the pain killer tablets.  She sat in the car frowning.  He drove without a word.


The situation was getting worst for her.  Her swollen elbow was paining, she knew, she wouldn’t be able to make Jilebee with such a paining elbow, the scooter would take at least a couple of days to get repaired.  She was worried about Happy Singh’s reaction.  


“What if he doesn’t give me his scooter anymore?” she winced in worry.  He glanced at her.  The situation overwhelming for her.  Every day she had to face a new problem with more financial loss.  She didn’t know how much it would cost her to repair his car.  The situation at home was no better.  She would have to face Buwaji..! Everything was going out of control, against her.  She couldn’t stop her tears from rolling down her cheeks.  She turned her face to hide them from him and preferred to look out of the window.  


He was watching her.  Her helplessness and anguish reflected in his heart.  He desperately wanted to help her.  He knew she wouldn’t agree.  He didn’t want her to break down like this. 

“Khushi! What happened?” he touched her shoulder gently stopping the car.  


“Nothing! Nothing is happening! Nothing is working for me!” She was trembling, clutching her paining elbow, still looking out of the window.  He turned her to face him.  She still avoided his gaze, looking down.  He wiped her cheeks with his fingers.  She broke down hiding her face in her palms.  He couldn’t control himself and wrapped his arms around her.  


“Shuu!” he cupped her tear soaked face and looked into her eyes.  


“Khushi..!” he felt her anguish. His heart cried out for her.  All his vengeance dissolved in her tears.  This was not the Khushi he wanted.  He desperately wanted her back in fighting spirit, back in her original form!


“Is there anything, I can do for you?” He asked gently running his thumbs on her cheeks.  That was enough to trigger her rage.  She jerked his hands and pushed him away.


“For God sake, don’t do anything for me! I have had enough from you!” she yelled.  He turned his face.  A line of smile appeared on his face.  She was coming back.  His warrior Khushi was back in full form. 


“I mean, if you need any help...!” he stretched it further she flared up again.


“Help? Do you think, I am that dumb to ask for help from you? I know what do mean by help.  More insult, more humiliation, more torture..! No Mr. Raizada!” He got down from the car and banged the door to stop her abruptly.  “What?” he had disappeared locking her up in the car!  She looked around in fright.  He was nowhere to be seen.


“See? Help! This is what his help is! Lock me up and disappear! Hey Devi Mayya, why do you have to send  him to my lot?” She was furious with her Devi Mayya too, for entangling her with him! She waited for him frowning.  Finally he came with a packet.  He sat in the car again taking out a jumbo ice cream pack.  “Have it!” he said holding it out to her.  She gaped.

“What?” she looked at the pack and up at his expressionless face.  “Take it!” he thrust the pack in her hand and opened the lip.  It was her favourite Mango Ice cream.  Her eyes flashed but she resisted.


“No, I don’t want!” she pushed it away and he clenched his fist.  “I said have it!” he yelled at the top of his voice and she made some involuntary actions in fright to get up and run away.  The tumbler was about to fall and he held it tight, dug the spoon and put the spoonful of ice cream in her open mouth.  


The ice cream did the trick.  She fell silent enjoying the taste.  She looked at him.  He had brought only one pack.  She frowned.


“You?” she asked angrily.  “No!” he looked at her hand busy stuffing ice cream in her mouth. 

“Aur  Ek  Chammch  Nahi  Laa  Sakatay  The? Couldn’t you get an extra spoon?” she asked angrily, holding out a spoon full for him too.  He looked at her and holding her hand, opened his mouth for her to feed him.  Her cheeks grew red and he smirked staring at her reddened face.  He sat back relaxed watching her eat ice cream.  Her face lit up.  She was back.  He sighed.  


“Thanllu..!” she said.  “What?” he asked raising his eyebrow.  “Thanklu!” she again tried to speak clearly in vain.  She pointed at her tongue... ! “Moy Tungh  beshoms  numbh” (My tongue gets numb) wheon  I eath  isheshkleem!” she could manage to say.  He had to try  hard to control his laughter.


She looked at him sulkily and turned her face to concentrate on finishing the ice cream.  He drove on with his spirits lifted too!






31 comments:

Unknown said...

today i anm first.
yesterday my first comment was not published
caring ARNAV
loved it

anuradha said...

just read the updates. i was out of station. missed a lot of them. just read them in one go. liked it a lot. so kkg got the icecream from her rakshas. truly touching.

Dayavanti said...

Ohh my my...i could have fallen back from my chair but controlled somehow...arey baap re..yeh toh sachmein overdose ho raha hai..but ice cream ka..that 20 minute journey you have described in this update..and put it so much life into it..

SUIIIIIIIIII...hehehehehe..can stop laughing at it..but still you manage to turn it into one of the dhak dhak moment..

whether you or me there is nothing which can describe the chemistry which runs between the two words which is Arnav and Khushi.. or rather two personalities..

Getting you that one thing which brings life back into you, Ice cream for khushi, and Arnav knows it, If this is not love then what is love..

Jose LOu dhs..i want to dance you know..by jumping all over

sushmita said...

loved ur update. yeah! both of them are always there for each other. both hope its arnav who finds shyams true colour first rather then khushi....

kalaiselvisblog said...

oh dear...wat to say.. loved loved our caring asr... oh my.. i visualized every word of u... dat injection.. hahaha.. so funny.. hw he held her close.. pressing her head on his chest... wow so romantic...

his help.. locking in d car.. hahaha.. den dat ice cream.. omg i couldnt believe dat our mighty asr came with an ice cream just for her.. superb.. den d way he took it from her hand.. hahaha.. me too blushing.. oh dear..even my spirits lifted tooo... thank u so so much dear...

Anonymous said...

WOW WOW WOW this is toooo much in a day him taking asking her to come with him taking her to th doctor then hugging her comforting then letting her know he wants to help then the ice cream

"cant u get another spoon" and her cheeks redden wo that was a highlight

Her spirit along with his great update khushifan

Aparna said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... so cute. I love it!! I loved it!! Mango ice cream... yummmm. So is she gonna work in her office again?

Mymind said...

A full fledged Arshi post....a very sweet one indeed .....more sweet than the mango ice-cream!....He knows her pretty well now....atleast the right buttons to be pushed to bring her back to herself!..... no soul in the house heard of the crash that took place at the gates?..
Both comfortable in each others embrace...they need to do some introspection...poor Happyji...hope he got his broken scooty!
Khushhifan...Why are the fonts having technical kharabi in between......?...testing our eyesight?

Anonymous said...

are you mad or what don't you have your own ideas, copying the serial...
you are such a b***h...
Your storyline is going to flop...
Stop writing as you have done it on myeduniya...
You are the worse writer I have ever seen....

Sumedha said...

Oh hello anonymous who the hell are you???
Don't dare to say anything against diiiii....
she is a perfect writer...

Wow Diiiiiiiiiii it was just Wow...
You laughing till now, but this anonymous changed my mood. I'll have to read the update...
And yes 'Thanklu' for the update...
hahahahahahahahahahahaha..
Update soon...
Love U....

Suhana said...

ahaaaaan!!!! Ish cream! numb tongue. He knows what she needs and when? First the needle then ice cream. Wah Arnav babua, aap to apni Khushi ko Jaante hi ho!

Message for anonymous...chup kar waar karna chod do! You are gutless to come forward with your identity ... if you can't say anything nice, don't speak at all. Save your 2 cents worth! Nobody gives a s*** to your opinion. Thank you.

sunitasharmadubey said...

OMG...talking after eating icesh cream...is very funny....I like that..
actualy all your writing skill is very touching....well done KF...

arhiforever said...

lol, too much, last few lines were hilarious, both are very strong personalities, he knows she would not ask him for help, but still he asks, and he takes her to a doctor knowing she will not go, like the way this is going, thx

When is Lavanya getting out?

smisham said...

wow injection n icecream in one day,he hurts ,he heals

Lakshmi said...

Wow!!!!full of Arshi....caring Arnav....but what abt Khushi's problems.....still praying to Devi maiya.....

Anonymous said...

Brilliant! Awwww it's so lovely to see ASR take care of khushi. Although he wants revenge, he takes his anger out on her, taunts her....at the end of the day all he wants to do is take care of her and ease her troubles!

All together now, say "awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"

The concern is so genuine and his behaviour is so different as to the way he treats L. He'll buy her an expensive gift but all our khushi needs is a mango flavoured ice cream! How did he know that's her favourite? I love the moments between them - even if she's angry at him - he'd rather she be like that than upset and worried. Bless!

Another wonderful update! Many many many thanks! Can't wait for the next one!

SB

Anonymous said...

This commet is for anonymous

I just read everyone's comments.....praise and constructive criticism is welcome I'm sure, but there is no need for nastiness. Why have you bothered to log into your phone/computer and read the update if you thinks it's not worth reading. You obviously have too much time on your hands. Appreciate the time taken for someone to put their thoughts and ideas into words or dont bother commenting and not putting your name. I don't think anyone who's read your story KF would think is anything less than fantastic - i'm sure all minus would agree. I believe in freedom of speech but pure nastiness is not appreciated.

SB

Applecut said...

Ultimate update it was. Where u get these ideas. Am thoroughly enjoyed alot in it. Hosptial scene and Ice cream, xcellent. We seen caring ASR in two situations at one update. Fantastic.

Oporajita said...

soooo what next..!!! we know after showing the caring side ASR will do something that will break our Khushi's heart...Nonetheless,, for now i m going to enjoy the moment that transpired between these two...always loved the updates which is belong to Arshi and Arshi only......and this one is very special...

Sneha said...

sooo cute!! awww.. arnav n khushi only... dts d part i have loved d most ALWAYS!!
Chalo Arnav knows dt y she dsnt take help frm him.. :)
though Khushi can take tips from him, like she was asking her jiji dat hw did he became so rich... arnav n khushi can discuss it, and arnav mite help her getting the basics of business... dt way she won't b humiliated and their bond can get more strong..


and seriusly, fr d anonymous who commented... obviously he/she would be reading the comments and updates to see what every1 and esp Khushifan di thinks and writes about it... chill dear and dnt read if u dnt like it...

Mymind said...

Hi Khushifan,

I know that being a creative you would be always vulnerable to negative criticism and even bashing. And being a counselor, you would be better at handling those. Still, I wanted to let you know that we all, those who are the regular readers here and even the ones at MeD are fans of your creativeness and always adore your work.

Thanks a lot for the wonderful reads that you provide us..

Anonymous said...

hi kushifan u told u have been approached by a publisher some one is jealous so dont we disheartend with bad comments WE ALL LOVE U .

u do not know how many fans of yours refresh their page thousand time.

Please continue

Dayavanti said...

Hey i was just reading the whole Opposite poles right from the beginning..just wanted to ask whether ASR has not forgotten some point which you mentioned in the updates where khushi joined his office first..and Khushi has not forgotten what lavanya did to her in the office during trials..hope to see lavanya apologising to her whenever the time comes.

Just aisehi...

lakshmi said...

HI KF,
Just now checked for any new updates and read all comments.. Hope u know how to handle negative comments....please keep doing ur work ....i love ur ff and u know like me many adore u as one of their favourite writer...please do what u do.....God bless U..

Anonymous said...

mango ice cream!!!!!!!!! my mouth is watering,i will have on my way home sssssssssssssss

Animen said...

Khushifan lovely update, I had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading Khushi's misery and how it affects ASR. Thanks

Applecut said...

Hai Khushifan. Taday a lot of times i checked your update. So, i came on comment scetion to leave a note. By that time, i crossed one unfaithfull comment by someone. Dnt listen that person words, if you read, dnt take those words to ur heart.V are all fans of ur great story.

Anonymous said...

I'm guessing no update today? I think it's nearly 11pm in India - 5 hours ahead I think....will look out for your update tomorrow. I've read this one about 10 times!

SB

Anonymous said...

One of the best story i have read ever! Very well said and you are a great writer. I enjoy reading an update everyday!

Unknown said...

hey KF ! I'm back ! Sooo many updates ! But the story is going on really well ! Waiting for the next one !
And congrats for the century !

carmen bogdan said...

I was really desperate I could not read your updates to date, but in return I can read the "gulp" episode after episode.
I like the "thirst"'s desperate Khushi Arnav the presence of the "combative" that so beautiful a description.